The random number generator has spoken (and frozen, and tried to choose the same person more than once RAE), but here are the critique winners!
#6 - @kathleea
#9 - @RaeAChang
#13 - @cattorresv
BUT WAIT THERE'S MORE! My super generous agency sister, Alexandra Sirowy, has volunteered her time to give two more critiques! (Thank you so much, Alexandra!) Alexandra's winners are:
#1 - @summywins
#16 - @Abigailswriting
If you won a critique from me, please follow me on Twitter (it can even be temporarily) so that I can send you a DM with submission instructions. If you won a critique from Alexandra, please email your first 250 words as a Word doc to Alexandra.Sirowy[at]gmail[dot]com (replacing the [at] with @ and the [dot] with a period, of course). Please include the title of your work and genre. You can send at your leisure - we will do our best to get back to you within a week of your sending it.
A huge thanks to everyone who helped spread the word about the giveaway! I'm sorry my current schedule won't allow me to take on more crits, but remember you can always find fellow writers to look over your work at places like AgentQueryConnect and CPSeek. Miss Snark's First Victim also has some awesome year-round opportunities for feedback, many that involve agents.
Thank you everyone for your interest, and best of luck to you with your query endeavors!